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Try this Tanka
a Japanese poem with 31 syllables in 5 lines, with 5 syllables in the 1st and 3rd lines, and 7 syllables in the others.
Here's mine:
Bill and Nicola
Sharing life as man and wife
Loving so deeply
Some people never have this
They did -- for eternity!
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Diagnosed 4/03/03, age 50
3.5 cm, 0/19 positive nodes
Stage IIA
Her2++, ER & PR++
RB Mastectomy, 4 AC,
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