I've revised it back and fourth. I definetly wanted a varied input because I want the right effect on people. I was hoping to get some kind of "Yeah, some people never get that chance, Julie's right" and then the kicker to be that "I" did. I will probably tinker with it quite a bit more till I am finished and happy with it.
I also thought I might add the slide show at the end to be the list of things.
I love all the input. Thank you all!!!
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