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I see the ones I can combine, I think... I missed that, thanks!
I think it's hard to read a poem like this without knowing the individual.
I probably should have mentioned, these are all of MY personal blessings and accomplishments.
For the one who said these were accomplishments, they are also blessings. Having children, being musically talented, making wonderful friends, meeting my soul mate and husband of 10 years, etc etc etc, all MY blessings.
Maybe I could figure out a way to tie a little bit of religious connotation in there. I certaintly wouldn't have been able to do all of it without His help.
I thought about l stopping the part about "Some People" after about 4 verses.
This was also something that was to be read during a slide show, where all of these things had pictures that went to them. I need to add stuff for the beginning of my life with my parents, family, etc.
LOVE the feedback! :-)
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