Forum: Keeping Your Mind Off of BC
07-28-2008, 11:42 AM
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PinkGirl
You're quick! Amazing how you catch on.
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Forum: Keeping Your Mind Off of BC
07-28-2008, 11:24 AM
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Bill
Didn't mean to intrude on your haiku thread, the tanka suggestion was for PinkGirl since she has such a gift with this!
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Forum: Keeping Your Mind Off of BC
07-28-2008, 11:16 AM
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Try this Tanka
a Japanese poem with 31 syllables in 5 lines, with 5 syllables in the 1st and 3rd lines, and 7 syllables in the others.
Here's mine:
Bill and Nicola
Sharing life as man and wife
Loving so...
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Forum: Keeping Your Mind Off of BC
07-28-2008, 10:42 AM
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Replies: 31
Views: 2,999
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Forum: Keeping Your Mind Off of BC
07-28-2008, 10:19 AM
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My Haiku
Nicola and Bill
Symbiotic mates for life
Apart, but nearby.
What a great love and admiration the two of you had for each other. Very refreshing.
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